Tuesday, March 26, 2019

English 10--Literary Analysis Written Response Exemplar


    In Paulo Coelho’s novella The Alchemist, it is clear that symbolism is being implemented in Coelho’s description of both the church and the tree at the beginning of the story.  Symbolism is when something such as an object or character or setting, though maintaining its literal meaning, represents something far more significant beyond itself.  At the beginning of the novella, Coelho writes, “the boy arrived with his herd at an abandoned church.  The roof had fallen in long ago, and an enormous sycamore had grown on the spot where the sacristy had once stood” (3).  Literally, the protagonist Santiago and his sheep are about to sleep in this rundown structure.  However, an astute reader soon realizes that this structure represents something far beyond itself with regard to Santiago’s life journey.  Coelho writes that “[t]he roof had fallen in,” which literally means that the roof has failed to fulfill its purpose of keeping out the elements.  Soon after this point in the novella, readers learn that religion has not fulfilled its intended purpose in Santiago’s life: “His parents had wanted him to become a priest, and thereby a source of pride for a simple farm family” (8).  In other words, Santiago, who “attended a seminary until he was sixteen” (8), is expected to learn and appreciate religion so much that he continues studying and teaching it for the rest of his life, and in so doing, he will make his family proud.  Santiago, though, “wanted to travel” (8).  He did not pursue the path of the priesthood, deciding instead to develop and flourish along another life path, much like the “sycamore [that] had grown on the spot where the sacristy had once stood.”  Like the roof, the sacristy, the room in the church in which sacred items were once kept, no longer fulfills its original role.  However, something equally sacred has grown in its place, which might symbolically foreshadow that where religion once “failed” Santiago, an alternative path will lead to growth.  Symbolism undeniably exists in Coelho’s novella.
      Coelho’s implementation of symbolism also helps develop a central idea of the novella, namely that all individuals must pursue their own paths to happiness and success, not those that others envision for them.  People develop and flourish via experience and reap additional rewards when they follow their dreams.  First off, had Santiago become a priest as his parents had initially hoped he would, he would not even have been in the abandoned church at the start of novella.  Santiago is at the church because he is a shepherd, a lifestyle that he decided on so that he could fulfill his dream of traveling and seeing the world.  It is in this same church that Santiago experiences a recurrent dream in which he is “in a field with [his] sheep, when a child appear[s] and…[takes him] by both hands and transport[s him] to the Egyptian pyramids” (13).  This dream ultimately sets Santiago off on his quest to find treasure at the pyramids that drives the plot of the novella, and none of this would have happened had he entered the priesthood.  Instead, Santiago travels across the Strait of Gibraltar, works for a crystal merchant in Africa, meets and falls in love with a woman, and eventually arrives at the pyramids, growing as a person as time progresses.  For example, when Santiago has a conversation with the crystal merchant prior to setting off into the desert, he thinks to himself, “There had been a time when [I] thought that [my] sheep could teach [me] everything [I] needed to know about the world.  But they could never have taught [me] Arabic” (58).  Santiago learns and appreciates this valuable lesson during his time with the crystal merchant.  It is the novella’s conclusion, however, where Coelho makes his theme most clear. Fittingly, a few pages before the novella ends, readers encounter the following passage: “‘Two years ago, right here on this spot, I had a recurrent dream, too.  I dreamed that I should travel to the fields of Spain and look for a ruined church where shepherds and their sheep slept.  In my dream, there was a sycamore growing out of the ruins of the sacristy, and I was told that, if I dug at the roots of the sycamore, I would find a hidden treasure.  But I’m not so stupid as to cross an entire desert just because of a recurrent dream’” (163).  This passage, words spoken by an African man who attacks Santiago at the pyramids, reveals that technically speaking, Santiago did not need to go anywhere to get the “Spanish gold coins…precious stones, gold masks adorned with red and white feathers, and stone statues embedded with jewels” (166) that readers see him dig up in the epilogue of the novella.  Bearing in mind the symbolism made evident at the start of the novella, though, readers realize that the ultimate treasure is not the chest buried beneath the sycamore, but instead, the growth experienced by Santiago on his journey that the sycamore represents.  The literal treasure is merely an added bonus, but not the most significant reward.  Coelho’s novella ends with the following words: “‘I’m coming, Fatima’” (167).  True love is also bestowed upon Santiago because of his pursuit of his dreams, helping readers draw the conclusion that the unique learning experiences and sense of fulfillment discovered on one’s journey is always more significant than the destination.